Round 2
Overall
- I do like the font that you chose but is there something that is the same or similar font weight but isnât so round?
Header
- Please remove the contact us button
- Make the menu items the following (listed in order)
- Signs Your Experiencing Defamation
- Defense Options
- Defamation Explained
- Resources
Hero
- I would like to use some sort of text highlight or effect so that âReclaim Your Reputationâ stands out.
- Make âour skilled attorneys are dedicatedâ text the same font size as âDefamation hits hardâ and donât add a space between the two. I just want the âDefmation hits hardâ to be on its own line
- Move the numbered section to be where the âPersonalized solutionsâ is and get rid of the header âProvide leaders in defamation lawâ
- For the numbered text make the current grey text white and the current white text grey
- Replace âList of certificationsâ with âProven Expertiseâ
- Replace âTotal Money Won for clientâ with âPersonalized Solutionsâ
- Replace âCases Won/ Handledâ with âCompassionate Supportâ
Defamations Deep Cuts
- Get rid of the arrow
- Make the non active text grey
CTA
- Can we use an image without people in id? I liek the other images youâve chosen
- Can you make the button style match the hero button style. Please make this update on all the other CTAs on the page
- I donât like the underlined text style for the pros and cons. Could we try making it have a background of
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. Keep the arrow with it
Testimonials
- This is better but itâs still a little cluttered, can we try making the testimonail text grey
Letter
- This is great, I like how itâs designed but the text isnât formatted properly
- Refer to the content, all the content that is on a new line should be on a new line in the design. We might need to make each text line a header but not use the bold
Round 1
Overall:
- For the header font please use a big bold font, we donât want to follow the traditional attorney webpage style with this design
- Please adjust the header font throughout the design to somehting big and bold
- We donât want to use the brown color
Hero Section
- Can we put âDefamation hits hard but Hepworth Legal hits back harderâ on itâs own line and have it stand out from the rest of the description text.
- Letâs make the âStart Your Defense Todayâ button an outline with an icon and the âLearn About Defamationâ a subtle grey color with the text underlined and no border
- I would like the âProvide Leader in Defamation Lawâ section to feel like itâs apart of the hero section similar to whatâs found here: https://westcoasttriallawyers.com
Defamation Simplified
- Remove the âDefamation Simplifiedâ text
- In the header make âRecognize the signsâ text the light grey that âDefamation Simplifiedâ text is and keep the âAre You A Victim of Defamationâ white
- Make the âunderstand the different typesâŚâ text closer to a 22px font size. I want that text to stand out, use this for reference https://ow.consulting/upgrade-digital/
Types of defamation section
- I donât like the brown backrground with the icon layout, can we try something else? I do like the way you laid out the panels though with the picture of the hammer
- Keep the header of each item white and the text
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- Make the header of each item closer to a 22px font size.
Defamationâs Deep Cuts
- In the header make âDefamationâs Deep Cutsâ text
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and keep the âThe Painful Impact Revealedâ white - Make the âBeyond the wordsâŚâ text closer to a 22px font size. I want that text to stand out, use this for reference https://ow.consulting/upgrade-digital/
- Put the Toggle list of text on the right instead of the left
- Keep the active text white instead of the brown
Navigating Options
- Keep this section bakground the
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color - Move the âYour path to justiceâ CTA section above the âNavigating Your Options For Defamatoin Defenseâ header and give it a background of
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. I want it to be boxed and not be full width, let me know if this make sense - Make the âunderstand your choices for a stronger stanceâ text closer to a 22px font size. I want that text to stand out, use this for reference https://ow.consulting/upgrade-digital/
- Get rid fo the âList of Potential Legal RoutesâŚâ text
Legal Routes List
- Overall i do not like how this is designed. The user should be able to clearly understand all their options at a glance. This isnât possible because all the text is white and nothing stands out.
- We do not want to use the brown color
- You made the hheader âLitigation: taking the case to court for a legal resolutionâ when the header should be âLitigationâ and the description should be âTaking the case to court for a legal resolutionâ
- The pros and cons needs to be designed better, they were formatted as list items when we wrote the text
Navigating Your Options
- This shouldnât be itâs own full width section but a boxed call to action that is a continuation of the list of legal routes but stands out because itâs ultimately the action we want them to take
Testimonials
- Make this section a dark background
- Make the âReal Stories Real Successâ white and the âOur CLients Speakâ
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- Remove the â-â
- Remove the âUnderstand your choice for a stronger stanceâ
- Make the âTheresâ not better way to understandâŚâ text closer to a 22px font size. I want that text to stand out, use this for reference https://ow.consulting/upgrade-digital/
- Testimonials
- Make the headlines of the testimonials longer and the descriptions shorter
- We wonât have photos or titles for the testimonials so remove this, just name and stars
- We want the testimonials to be in a carousel
Certifications
- This section should feel like itâs apart of the Testimonials section not separate
Letter
- The entire text of this section is supposed to be big and bold. We want every word to stand out. I envisioned a scroll effect where the active line is white the line below it is a dark white the line after that is a grey and the rest of the text is a darker grey so itâs not that visible. And as you scroll the active line changes and so do the ones following it. Use this for inspriation https://onepagelove.com/tag/text-only/page/5
- Move the âWe understand how it feelsâ to be the first line of text.
- Remove the image of the guy and put this image next to the end of the letter where it says michael hepworth and his role and experience. We want the image to be small
Team
- Make this section a dark background
- Make the âOur Dedicated Attorneys & Associatesâ white and the âExpertise You Can Rely Onâ
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- Remove the â-â
- Remove the âGet to know the profesionals..â text
- Make the âAt Hepworth Legal, our strength liesâŚâ text closer to a 22px font size. I want that text to stand out, use this for reference https://ow.consulting/upgrade-digital/
- Please see the list of attorneys here, these are the photos we will be able to use so your design wontâ work. https://www.hepworthlegal.com
- Remove the âread moreâ link
Navigating the intricacies
- I really like the image of the hammer and how itâs laid out!
- Make the âEmpower yourself withâŚâ text closer to a 22px font size. I want that text to stand out, use this for reference https://ow.consulting/upgrade-digital/
- Please remove the brown color. Make sure the headers of each is the same font size as the âEmpower yourself withâŚâ
- Make the description text the light grey
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- Change âDefamation Overviewâ text to âWhat is Defamation?
- Change âDefamation Per Seâ to âDefamation and the Lawâ
- Remove the colons from all the headers
Resources
- I want this section to be apart of the âNavigating the Intricaciesâ section so they should have the same background color
- Make the brown header text white
- Make the descriptions #808080
- Make the link in the text be underlined and have the same style as the secondary link in the hero
Contact Us
- The email address needs to be a full contact form with Name, Email, Phone, and Please Detail Your Issue fields
- I really like the style of the contact boxed contact section, make sure to use this for the CTAs